Traveling with my friends

2020-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to go with my friends when traveling. They are my university friends and my best friends. Our last travel is traveling Kangwondo in summer of 2018. We played in East sea and ate delicious seafood. I miss them because we don\'t meet after that. I want to go Thailand with my friends this year. I\'m not interest in travel but I\'m curious of Thailand. I want to visit Bangkok and eat Thailand food. I donate to a Thailand girl since 2016, and I\'m the fan of Korea idol \'Minnie of G-Idle\' who comes from Thailand. So I want to know about Thailand, and with my friends we\'ll travel happily. I wish my hope will come true.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your homework and sharing your desire to travel to Thailand.

I hope that you wish will come true as I know that it will make you happy. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I want to go with my friends when traveling.

>> CORRECT.

They are my university friends and my best friends.

>> CORRECT.

Our last travel is traveling Kangwondo in summer of 2018.

>> Our last travel was in Kangwondo in the summer of 2018.

We played in East sea and ate delicious seafood.

>> We played in the East sea and ate delicious seafood.

I miss them because we don\'t meet after that.

>> I miss them because we didn\'t meet after that.

I want to go Thailand with my friends this year.

>> CORRECT.

I\'m not interest in travel but I\'m curious of Thailand.

>> I\'m not interested in traveling but I\'m curious about Thailand.

I want to visit Bangkok and eat Thailand food.

>> I want to visit Bangkok and eat Thai food.

I donate to a Thailand girl since 2016, and I\'m the fan of Korea idol \'Minnie of G-Idle\' who comes from Thailand.

>> I have been donating for a Thai girl since 2016 and I\'m also a fan of a Korean idol whose name is Minnie of G-Idle who came from Thailand.

So I want to know about Thailand, and with my friends we\'ll travel happily.

>> CORRECT.

I wish my hope will come true.

>> I hope my wish will come true.

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