TRAVELLING ,5,6 TRANSPORTATION 1,2
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5. There are many things that we usually do.
>> Correct.
First, we often go to watch recent released movies.
>> First, we often watch recent released movies.
After finished movie, we eat some delicious food and go cafe to talk about us.
>> After the movie, we eat some delicious food and go to the café to talk.
Also, sometimes we enjoy shopping when next day we go to trip on school.
>> Also, sometimes we enjoy shopping the day before going on a school trip.
6. Of course.
>> Correct.
I spend time with my family after school, weekends, or holidays.
>> Correct.
So I have much time to enjoy enough with my family.
>> Correct.
Since I hang out with my friends at school or when friends birthday I can spend time as much as family.
>> Since I hang out with my friends at school or on my friends birthdays, I can spend time some time with my family too.
1. In my country, there are so many buses so I can take the bus anytime, anywhere.
>> Correct.
Subway is also really convenient and useful, but in my area, Ulsan, because there are no subway it is quite hard to move when traffic jam.
>> The subway is also really convenient and useful, but in my area, Ulsan, because there are no subways, it is quite hard to move during a traffic jam.
2.I usually use buses. It\'s because as I said, since there are so many buses on the road I can use when I busy.
>> I usually use buses. It\'s because, as I said, since there are so many buses on the road, I can ride on it anytime.
However, If it is rainy or when I was late I almost use taxi.
>> However, If it is raining or when I am running late, I almost always ride on a taxi.
Taxi is more convenient than bus, but in part of money taxi is really expensive.
>> Riding on a taxi is more convenient than riding on a bus, but it is more expensive.
So I prefer to use buses.
>> Correct.
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