TRAVELLING ,5,6 TRANSPORTATION 1,2

2019-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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5. There are many things that we usually do. First, we often go to watch recent released movies. After finished movie, we eat some delicious food and go cafe to talk about us. Also, sometimes we enjoy shopping when next day we go to trip on school. 6. Of course. I spend time with my family after school, weekends, or holidays. So I have much time to enjoy enough with my family. Since I hang out with my friends at school or when friends birthday I can spend time as much as family. 1. In my country, there are so many buses so I can take the bus anytime, anywhere. Subway is also really convenient and useful, but in my area, Ulsan, because there are no subway it is quite hard to move when traffic jam. 2.I usually use buses. It\'s because as I said, since there are so many buses on the road I can use when I busy. However, If it is rainy or when I was late I almost use taxi. Taxi is more convenient than bus, but in part of money taxi is really expensive. So I prefer to use buses.

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5. There are many things that we usually do.

>> Correct.


First, we often go to watch recent released movies.

>> First, we often watch recent released movies.


After finished movie, we eat some delicious food and go cafe to talk about us.

>> After the movie, we eat some delicious food and go to the café to talk.


 Also, sometimes we enjoy shopping when next day we go to trip on school. 

>> Also, sometimes we enjoy shopping the day before going on a school trip.



 6. Of course.

>> Correct.


I spend time with my family after school, weekends, or holidays.

>> Correct.


So I have much time to enjoy enough with my family.

>> Correct.


Since I hang out with my friends at school or when friends birthday I can spend time as much as family.

>> Since I hang out with my friends at school or on my friends birthdays, I can spend time some time with my family too.



 1. In my country, there are so many buses so I can take the bus anytime, anywhere.

>> Correct.


Subway is also really convenient and useful, but in my area, Ulsan, because there are no subway it is quite hard to move when traffic jam. 

>> The subway is also really convenient and useful, but in my area, Ulsan, because there are no subways, it is quite hard to move during a traffic jam. 


 2.I usually use buses. It\'s because as I said, since there are so many buses on the road I can use when I busy.

>>  I usually use buses. It\'s because, as I said, since there are so many buses on the road, I can ride on it anytime.


 However, If it is rainy or when I was late I almost use taxi.

>> However, If it is raining or when I am running late, I almost always ride on a taxi.


Taxi is more convenient than bus, but in part of money taxi is really expensive.

>> Riding on a taxi is more convenient than riding on a bus, but it is more expensive.


So I prefer to use buses.

>> Correct.



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