Travelling to other countrys is interesting.
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Hi! Rich
Travelling to other countrys is interesting.
I have been to 4 countrys.
I have been to Florida in America.
There is beautiful beach in Florida.
But there is an awesome hurricane too.
I heard that there is many typhoon in Philippine.
And then
I visited Thailand with my family.
There is very hot.
We saw many elephants, alligators in there.
Is there elephants, alligator in Philippine?
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Hi [이름],
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Hi! Rich
>>> Hi Rich!
Travelling to other countrys is interesting.
>>> Travelling to different countries is interesting.
I have been to 4 countrys.
>>>>I have been to 4 countries.
I have been to Florida in America.
>>>>I have been to Florida and America.
There is beautiful beach in Florida.
>>>>There are beautiful beaches in Florida.
But there is an awesome hurricane too.-- correct, or
>>> But there is hurricane too.
I heard that there is many typhoon in Philippines.
>>>>I heard that there are many typhoons in the Philippines.
And then
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I visited Thailand with my family.
>>> I have visited Thailand with my family.
There is very hot.
>>> That country has hot weather.
We saw many elephants, alligators in there.
>>> We saw many elephants and alligators out there.
Is there elephants, alligator in Philippine?
>>> Are there elephants and alligators in the Philippines? ( ANSWER: Yes, we have elephants and alligators here in the Philippines. kkk)
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