Travelling to other countrys is interesting.

2010-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi! Rich Travelling to other countrys is interesting. I have been to 4 countrys. I have been to Florida in America. There is beautiful beach in Florida. But there is an awesome hurricane too. I heard that there is many typhoon in Philippine. And then I visited Thailand with my family. There is very hot. We saw many elephants, alligators in there. Is there elephants, alligator in Philippine?

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Hi [이름],    It was a short class but it was worth it. Here are your corrections...I know you can do better.   Hi! Rich >>> Hi Rich! Travelling to other countrys is interesting. >>> Travelling to different countries is interesting. I have been to 4 countrys. >>>>I have been to 4 countries. I have been to Florida in America. >>>>I have been to Florida and America. There is beautiful beach in Florida. >>>>There are beautiful beaches in Florida. But there is an awesome hurricane too.-- correct, or >>> But there is hurricane too. I heard that there is many typhoon in Philippines. >>>>I heard that there are many typhoons in the Philippines. And then (OMIT/REMOVE) I visited Thailand with my family. >>> I have visited Thailand with my family. There is very hot. >>> That country has hot weather. We saw many elephants, alligators in there. >>> We saw many elephants and alligators out there. Is there elephants, alligator in Philippine? >>> Are there elephants and alligators in the Philippines? ( ANSWER: Yes, we have elephants and alligators here in the Philippines. kkk)

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