Travling

I went to lot of places with my family but the London was the best. Because in London there were so many beautiful instructures such as a London eye and London bridge! The weather was cold but my family was so exited. Next our family went to Elizabeth queen`s palace and we took a walk on Elizabeth queen`s garden. And we saw lots of beautiful things such as Chipmunk and flamingos. It was very interesting experience to me because in Korea we didn't have modern(?) instructures. Also we rode double-decker bus and I was so enthusiastic because I felt I was very tall and everything looked so tiny. So that is the reason why I like the London the most^^

Thank you for making a composition! It\'s good to know that you had fun in London! Now I really want to go to London too (^_^). I hope that you will get the chance to visit another awesome country in the future. I\'ll talk to later! ^^, ~T.Karen (-^o^-)   I went to lot of places with my family but the London was the best. >> I went to lot of places with my family but London was the best.  Because in London there were so many beautiful instructures such as a London eye and London bridge! >> Because in London there were so many beautiful infrastructures such as the London eye and the London bridge!  The weather was cold but my family was so exited. >> Correct!  Next our family went to Elizabeth queen`s palace and we took a walk on Elizabeth queen`s garden. >> Then our family went to Queen Elizabeth\'s palace and we took a walk her garden.  And we saw lots of beautiful things such as Chipmunk and flamingos. >> We saw lots of beautiful things such as chipmunks and flamingos.  It was very interesting experience to me because in Korea we didn\'t have modern(?) instructures. >> It was a very interesting experience for me because in Korea we don\'t have modern infrastructures.  Also we rode double-decker bus and I was so enthusiastic because I felt I was very tall and everything looked so tiny. >> We also rode a double-decker bus and I was so enthusiastic about it felt like I was very tall and everything looked so tiny.  So that is the reason why I like the London the most^^ >> Correct!