trend
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One of of tendency of trend is it is changing earlier than we expect.
When something is popular, we expect it to continue for a long period.
But trends always change and disappear very often.
I think some trend can continue for a long time and give influence people life than that become culture.
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Ms. [이름]!
Trends often move fast because of a mix of psychology, technology, and culture. That\'s the reason why I don\'t follow trends, especially in fashion.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~
One of of tendency of trend is it is changing earlier than we expect.
>>> One of of tendencies of the trend is that it is changing earlier than we expect.
When something is popular, we expect it to continue for a long period.
>>> CORRECT!
But trends always change and disappear very often.
>>> CORRECT!
I think some trend can continue for a long time and give influence people life than that become culture.
>>> I think some trends can continue for a long time and have more influence on people\'s lives than they become culture.
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