trend
학생이 쓴 원문
In my case, I did not depend on trend itself even wearing or hairstyle.
Even though I am interested in several popular culture areas, I don\'t follow it thoughtless.
I worry about that young generation follow or imitate even the bad things decadent and obscene.
So good culture and good experience need to them.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
This is true. The effect of trend is highly observed among young people because they want to be \"part of the group\". Some of them feel \"belongingness\' if they go with the trend. I hope parents will continue to intervene for their children, especially when it comes to fashion.
T. Aki~
In my case, I did not depend on trend itself even wearing or hairstyle.
>>> In my case, I did not depend on the trend itself, even wearing or hairstyle.
Even though I am interested in several popular culture areas, I don\'t follow it thoughtless.
>>> Even though I am interested in several popular culture areas, I don\'t follow them thoughtlessly.
I worry about that young generation follow or imitate even the bad things decadent and obscene.
>>> I worry about that young generation following or imitate even the bad things, decadent, and obscene.
So good culture and good experience need to them.
>>> So good culture and good experience are needed for them.
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