Trends
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Sometimes trends make some people follow them blindly, so they seem to foster some kind of conformity or uniformity. But, while pursuing some trends, some people make the trends more different and unique . They want to innovate some trends in their own way and lead different trends.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
You are right! Sometimes trends tend to encourage conformity, just so people can say they belong. But as I’ve seen in Korea, aside from following trends, people tend to be more innovative and become trendsetters, since they develop new trends inspired by old ones, which is actually a good thing!
- T. Caitlyn
Sometimes trends make some people follow them blindly, so they seem to foster some kind of conformity or uniformity.
>> CORRECT
But, while pursuing some trends, some people make the trends more different and unique .
>> But while pursuing some trends, some people make them more unique and different.
They want to innovate some trends in their own way and lead different trends.
>> They want to innovate trends in their own way and create new ones.
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