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If you will create own holiday, when and what will be the name of your own holiday?^^ that's after the my birth day. because it could go to trip. just only me.
My plan is a 1night 2day for had a tent.
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Teacher Janette
If you will create own holiday, when and what will be the name of your own holiday?^^
>>If you will create your own holiday, when and what will be its name?
that\'s after the my birth day. because it could go to trip. just only me.
>>I\'ll make my birthday as a holiday so that I can go on a trip alone.My plan is a 1night 2day for had a tent.
>>My plan is to spend two days and a night in a tent.
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