Trip in Hukuoka

Dear [이름]!!

It\'s fun to hear about your adventure in Hukuoka!!

~Teacher Megan~

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

We didn\'t do a lot of activities in Hukuoka, we just hung around over the city.

>>> Correct.

Anyway there are many shopping places in Hukuoka, the Canal city is one of them that many Korean often visit.

>>> Correct.

the canal city is a complex which has 4 parts of buildings and each part are divided by canal.

>>> Correct.

 and the big spring is placed in the center of the shopping mall, it holds the spring show every hour.

>>> Correct.

we enjoyed to hang around there.

>>> we enjoyed hanging around.

we bought some gift for our families and us.

>>> we bought some gifts for our families and ours.

Hukuoka is famous for salted pollack roe, they make food product, such as biscuit which is called \"Menbei\".

>>> Hukuoka is famous for salted pollack roe, they make food products, such as biscuit which is called \"Menbei\".

 the Menbei sounds like weird when it is biscuit made of salted pollack roe.

>>> Menbei sounds weird when it is a biscuit made of salted pollack roe.

 but it taste like salty and sweet. and it has many taste like shrimp, cheese, tomato. every taste has own specialty.

>>> but it taste salty and sweet. and it has many taste like shrimp, cheese, tomato. every taste has its own specialty.