Trip place of Korea

I want to go to my father's home with a foreign visitor. There is Kangwon-do. Actually, I like an atmosphere of countryside. So when I go to the trip, I usually prefer to choose countryside. That is why I recommend my father's home. It is located inside mountain. So I can breath very fresh ai. In addition, there are lots of stream. So I think if a foreign visitor go to my father's home, They can feel Korean nature well.

Hi there [이름], Happy happy Monday!! Thank you for sending your homework. I am glad that you are finding time to practice your writing skills. You have expressed your thoughts well. Your sentences are getting better each day. Just try not to commit the same mistakes everyday. ^^ Here are the corrections I made for you. See you! -- T. Giselle ^^   I want to go to my father\'s home with a foreign visitor.>> Correct. >> OR: If I have a foreign visitor, I wil bring him/her to my father\'s home.There is Kangwon-do.>> This place is called Kangwon-do. >> My father\'s hometown is Kangwon-do.Actually, I like an atmosphere of countryside.>> Actually, I like the atmosphere in the countryside.So when I go to the trip, I usually prefer to choose countryside.>> So when I go for a trip, I usually prefer to go to the countryside.That is why I recommend my father\'s home.>> Correct.It is located inside mountain.>> It is located in the mountains.So I can breath very fresh ai.>> Correct. (Spelling check: air)In addition, there are lots of stream.>> In addition, there are lots of streams there.So I think if a foreign visitor go to my father\'s home,They can feel Korean nature well. >> So I think if a foreign visitor visits my father\'s home, he or she can have a feel of Korean nature. >> OR: So I think if a foreign visitor visits my father\'s home, he or she can experience Korean nature well.