Trip to east sea.

2011-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I went on a trip to east sea this week with my cousin. We went on a trip suddenly without any plan. Before going on a trip , I drop by the library and borrwed some books about east sea to get some information. The east sea is the most beautiful sea in korea. Since it was so beautiful , I can get rid of my stress. and we ate several specialties like big crab and beed there. The trip costed me more than 300 dollars. But it was worth it. We met some girls in the pub there. we drank alchol together and talked about each others hometown.

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My dear [이름], That was a very good trip you had on your vacation, how I wish I could also have one like that..kkk... Anyway, keep up the good work my dear and talk to you later..:) T.Cam  I went on a trip to east sea this week with my cousin.>>correctWe went on a trip suddenly without any plan.>.correctBefore going on a trip , I drop by the library and borrwed some books about east sea to get some information.>>Before going on a trip , I dropped by the library and borrowed some books about east sea to get some information.The east sea is the most beautiful sea in korea.>>correctSince it was so beautiful , I can get rid of my stress.>>correctand we ate several specialties like big crab and beed there.>>correctThe trip costed me more than 300 dollars.>>The trip cost me more than 300 dollars.But it was worth it.>>correctWe met some girls in the pub there.>>correctwe drank alchol together and talked about each others hometown. >>correct

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