Trip to Gangneung

2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I went to trip to Gangneung last weekend with my b.f. It was actually to see cherry blossom but the weather was abnormally cold and there was some mixed rain and snow like frizzle, so the first day was not as good as looking around the city. Fortunately, the second day it was sunny and warmer than the first day, we hung around to see the tourist attractions. There was a tv program showing the histories and interesting tour spots in many different cities before, called 'Al-seul-shin-jap' which was my favorite tv show. I was excited to visit one of the places shown on the tv program. The name of the place is 'Seon-gyo-jang' that was a traditional building where one of the richest person used to live long time ago in Choseon dynasty. It was so beautiful and huge like a small palace. I enjoyed a lot strolling around the house and garden, but we had some problem that my b.f's leg was not fully recovered from the injury yet, so we were not able to look around more places enough....

강사 첨삭

Hey Min!(\",)

Wow! it\'s nice to get out of the city from time to time to enjoy the beauty of the countryside. I\'m happy for you!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I went to trip to Gangneung last weekend with my b.f.

>> I went on a trip to Gangneung last weekend with my b.f.
 It was actually to see cherry blossom but the weather was abnormally cold and there was some mixed rain and snow like frizzle, so the first day was not as good as looking around the city.

>> It was actually to see Cherry blossoms but the weather was abnormally cold and there was some mixed rain and snow (it\'s called sleet), so the first day was not good as we went looking around the city.
 Fortunately, the second day it was sunny and warmer than the first day, we hung around to see the tourist attractions.

>> Fortunately, the second day  was sunny and warmer than the first day so we went around to see the tourist attractions.
 There was a tv program showing the histories and interesting tour spots in many different cities before, called \'Al-seul-shin-jap\' which was my favorite tv show. I was excited to visit one of the places shown on the tv program.

>> There was a TV program showing the historical places and interesting tourist spots in many different cities before, called \'Al-seul-shin-jap\' which was my favorite TV show.

  I was excited to visit one of the places shown on the TV program.

>> correct!
 The name of the place is \'Seon-gyo-jang\' that was a traditional building where one of the richest person used to live long time ago in Choseon dynasty.

>> correct!

 It was so beautiful and huge like a small palace.

>> correct!

I enjoyed a lot strolling around the house and garden, but we had some problem that my b.f\'s leg was not fully recovered from the injury yet, so we were not able to look around more places enough....

>> I enjoyed strolling around the house and  the garden a lot, but we had some problem because my b.f\'s leg was not fully recovered from the injury yet, so we were not able to look around more places.

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