trip to jeju island

With my parents I went to jeju island. It was a family trip. But the actual reason was to congratulate my parents wedding anniversery. we go tour during the day and when the sun sets and tour finish we go out and eat dinner near our hotel. we ate delicious meat during the night. It was very nice and unforgettable memorry. we took many pictures and head many information about jeju island. jeju island is continue developing and many facilities are planning to be bilt in jeju island. i'm really look forward to it. I want to go jeju island again.

Hello [이름]. Wow that was a great experience. Thank you for sharing it to me. Your sentences are good, just be careful with spellings, capitalization of words and word order. Teacher May With my parents I went to jeju island. It was a family trip. >> I went to Jeju Island with my parents. It was a family trip.But the actual reason was to congratulate my parents wedding anniversery.>> It was to celebrate my parents wedding anniversary.we go tour during the day and when the sun sets and >> We toured during the day until the sun sets.tour finish we go out and eat dinner near our hotel.>> When the tour was finished, we went out to eat dinner near our hotel.we ate delicious meat during the night. >> We ate delicious meal during the night. It was very nice and unforgettable memorry.>> It was very a nice and unforgettable memory. we took many pictures and head many information about jeju island.>> We took many pictures and heard a lot of information about Jeju Island. jeju island is continue developing and many facilities are planning to be bilt in jeju island. >> Jeju Isaland is developing continuously and many facilities are being planned to be built in Jeju Island.i'm really look forward to it. I want to go jeju island again. >> I'm really looking forward to it. I want to go back to Jeju Island.