Trip to Macao #1
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi
Nice to meet you.
My name is [이름].
How are you? I am fine Thank you.
I didn’t expect there would be many people
But look around you.
I am getting a little nervous.
But I will try to do my best.
I am here to tell you about the trip to Macao
Where I went 2 years ago with my colleagues
And It was an unforgettable experience.
So I would like to share my experience with you.
If you ok, Let’s see Macao in detail . Shall we?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I bet your Macao trip has a colorful story to it. ;) Here are your corrections. Talk to you later. -Teacher JM
Hi
>>>Correct
Nice to meet you.
Nice to meet you.
>>>Correct
My name is [이름].
My name is [이름].
>>>Correct
How are you? I am fine Thank you.
How are you? I am fine Thank you.
>>>Correct
I didn’t expect there would be many people
I didn’t expect there would be many people
>>>I didn't expect that there would be many people here
But look around you.
But look around you.
>>>Correct
I am getting a little nervous.
I am getting a little nervous.
>>>Correct
But I will try to do my best.
But I will try to do my best.
>>>Correct
I am here to tell you about the trip to Macao
I am here to tell you about the trip to Macao
>>>Correct
Where I went 2 years ago with my colleagues
Where I went 2 years ago with my colleagues
>>>correct
And It was an unforgettable experience.
And It was an unforgettable experience.
>>> It was an unforgettable experience.
So I would like to share my experience with you.
So I would like to share my experience with you.
>>>So I would like to share my experience with you.
If you ok, Let’s see Macao in detail . Shall we?
If you ok, Let’s see Macao in detail . Shall we?
>>>If it's ok, Let's see Macao in detail. Shall we?
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