Tropical fruit
학생이 쓴 원문
My friend bought several kinds of fruits twice. She bought longans,dragon fruits,mangoes,mangosteens,rambutans,and salads. She also took a watermelon. Actually she wanted to try durian, but the other friends and I strongly opposed.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
It’s nice to know that your friend is very interested in tropical fruits. Like I said in class, I was really curious to try durian before, but I ended up not liking it. Now, I’m curious about salak, and I hope I can try it someday.
- T. Caitln
My friend bought several kinds of fruits twice.
>> My friend bought several kinds of fruit twice.
She bought longans,dragon fruits,mangoes,mangosteens,rambutans,and salads.
>> She bought longans, dragon fruit, mangoes, mangosteens, rambutans, and salak.
She also took a watermelon.
>> She also bought a watermelon
Actually she wanted to try durian, but the other friends and I strongly opposed.
>> Actually, she wanted to try durian, but the other friends and I strongly opposed it.
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