Trump
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We have a big pressure in many areas because of Trump’s policies
They intend to make responsibility for America’s economy recovery to other countries including Korea.
They require Korean companies force to build factories and institutions inside America.
If not, Korean companies should pay very high tariff.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Yes, The policy of Trump has shaken many countries including the existing policies. The biggest problem in our country is deportation. Well, if they should have abode the law in America, they wouldn\'t be experiencing this.
Happy weekend!
Aki~
We have a big pressure in many areas because of Trump’s policies
>>> We are facing significant pressure in many areas due to Trump\'s policies
They intend to make responsibility for America’s economy recovery to other countries including Korea.
>>> The U.S. intends to shift the responsibility for America\'s economic recovery onto other countries, including Korea.
They require Korean companies force to build factories and institutions inside America.
>>> They are demanding that Korean companies build factories and institutions within the U.S.
If not, Korean companies should pay very high tariffs.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Otherwise, it could result in extremely high tariffs for Korean companies
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