Trump\'s policies
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I don\'t know exactly how many new policies he tryst to implement. Among them, I\'m worried about some policies which are very America- centered and exclusive. First,I hate his order to eliminate environmental programs of the government. And I am worried about his policy for expansion of America territory. I also have a concern about his recognition that there are just two sexes. In addition, I disagree with his policy on the withdrawal from WHO.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you! Since we are not American citizens, I think we are both worried that policies that are America-centered will greatly affect how they treat other countries. America is a very powerful country, and if they want to control other countries, I think they can, which is scary.
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t know exactly how many new policies he tryst to implement.
>> I don\'t know exactly how many new policies he tries to implement.
Among them, I\'m worried about some policies which are very America- centered and exclusive.
>> CORRECT
First,I hate his order to eliminate environmental programs of the government.
>> CORRECT
And I am worried about his policy for expansion of America territory.
>> And I am worried about his policy for the expansion of American territory.
I also have a concern about his recognition that there are just two sexes.
>> CORRECT
In addition, I disagree with his policy on the withdrawal from WHO.
>> CORRECT
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