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학생이 쓴 원문
Many people can\'t distinguish between an atom bomb and a nuclea power plant.
The oppsition party is abusing political attack issue not for people, not for an environment.
They are hypocrite.
I don\'t support even the ruling party.
We need objective attitude not unconditionally opposition.
I worry about more, untreated unclear waste both North Korea and China.
Some politians and Union menbers stimulate uneasy and spilt of society for thenself\'s benefit.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I guess when it comes to this kind of circumstance, the government should be ready enough to manage waste water disposal because there will be a lot of people and areas that will be affected. They should come up with a solution not to make their position and power stronger but for the welfare of every citizen.
See you later.
Aki~
Many people can\'t distinguish between an atom bomb and a nuclea power plant.
>>> Many people can\'t distinguish between an atomic bomb and a nuclear power plant.
The oppsition party is abusing political attack issue not for people, not for an environment.
>>> The opposition party is abusing political attack issues not for people, not for the environment.
They are hypocrites.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t support even the ruling party.
>>> CORRECT!
We need objective attitude not unconditionally opposition.
>>> We need an objective attitude, not unconditional opposition.
I worry about more, untreated unclear waste both North Korea and China.
>>> I worry about more, untreated unclear waste in both North Korea and China.
Some politians and Union menbers stimulate uneasy and spilt of society for thenself\'s benefit.
>>> Some politicians and Union members stimulate uneasily and spilled of society for their benefit.
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