Trust.

If there is trust between two people, They don't suspect each other. People may feel nervous when someone's saying is different from doing. Especially in politics, It is occurred when sentence which made by someone is turn over completely. Promise, Pledge and so on, all kinds of these things are guaranteed by word. The most important thing is doing whatever he/she said. Today, Korean soccer team loose the game versus Gana. It's score is 4:0. the coach Hong said that I enlisted 23 players who have best condition wherever player plays in K-league or Europe-league. (Europe-leagues are thought as better than K(korea)-league) But many people didn't agree with it. the result tells that his decision is not good. It seems like he didn't keep his word. so many people suspect his ability eventhough he was the best player in the world cup 2002. When the word correct with doing, person may get a trust.

Good evening [이름]. ^^ Thank you for writing a long essay. I hope I was able to get your point accross with some of your sentences. Please check it and if you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. Trust is really important in any relationship. We should always be honest. Tell me more about this in class.Teacher Nina   If there is trust between two people, They don\'t suspect each other. >> Correct >> OR: If there is trust between two people, they don\'t have any suspicious ideas towards each other. People may feel nervous when someone\'s saying is different from doing. >> Did you mean: People may feel nervous when someone is saying a different thing based on their actions. Especially in politics, It is occurred when sentence which made by someone is turn over completely. >> Did you mean: Especially in politics, it occured when a sentence which made by someone who is really different. Promise, Pledge and so on, all kinds of these things are guaranteed by word. >> Promise, pledge and so on, all of these things are guaranteed by the words used. The most important thing is doing whatever he/she said. >> Correct >> OR: The most important thing is to do whatever he/ she said. Today, Korean soccer team loose the game versus Gana. >> CorrectIt\'s score is 4:0. the coach Hong said that I enlisted 23 players who have best condition wherever player plays in K-league or Europe-league. >> Did you mean: The score was 4:0. Coach Hong said that he enlisted 23 playes who had the best condition whenever they play K-league or Europe-league.(Europe-leagues are thought as better than K(korea)-league) >> (Europe-leagues are thought that is  better than K(korea)-league)But many people didn\'t agree with it. >> Correct the result tells that his decision is not good. >> The result tells that his decision was not good. It seems like he didn\'t keep his word. >> It seemed like he didn\'t keep his word. so many people suspect his ability eventhough he was the best player in the world cup 2002. >> Correct >> OR: So many people are suspecting about his abilities even though he was the best player in the World Cup in 2002. When the word correct with doing, person may get a trust. >> Did you mean: When the word / promise is done with the action, the person can achieve trust.