Trust issue
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If they have some problems with trust issue . firist , I want to give them some advise they must do not anything that breaks trust such as lying ofter or being late often , but you should often do things that build trust
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If they have some problems with trust issue . firist , I want to give them some advise they must do not anything that breaks trust such as lying ofter or being late often ,
>>If they have some problems with trust issues, first, I want to give them some advice: they must avoid doing anything that breaks trust, such as lying often or being late frequently.
but you should often do things that build trust
>Instead, they should often engage in actions that build trust.
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