Trusting a person

2021-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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What are the factors you consider when trusting a person? I consider that how a person is honest and respectful. I also see responsibility when trusting a person. It is important to take responsibility for our behaviors. I consider the communication and empathy to the other person. I want to communicate with no fear and being empathized can make me trust a person.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I agree with the factors you mentioned in trusting a person.
They are truly essential for us to believe in them since they are qualities of a good person. ^^

I hope that we\'ll be able to find more people which we can trust in our lifetime. 

~Teacher Gina

I consider that how a person is honest and respectful. 
>> I consider how a person is honest and respectful. 
I also see responsibility when trusting a person. 
>> CORRECT.
It is important to take responsibility for our behaviors.
>> CORRECT.
I consider the communication and empathy to the other person. 
>> CORRECT.
I want to communicate with no fear and being empathized can make me trust a person.
>> I want to communicate with no fear and being able to empathize can make me trust a person.

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