Try and Choose

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

If there is new restaurant that affords same menu as old one, I usually go for a try unless I want the guaranteed flavor. 

>> If there is a new restaurant that affords the same menu as the old one, I usually go for a try, unless I want the guaranteed flavor. 

Since I tend to know more information, I go to new restaurant. 

>> Since I tend to know more information, I go to a new restaurant. 

It is not always better than old one, but it is worth try.

>> It is not always better than the old one, but it is worth try.