Try to be a man of value
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually we humans are valuable beings but we don\'t know our values. To become a man of value means that you should find dignity of human beings and try to contribute to others\' and community\'s value rather than pursuing your own success.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree! One\'s value and the value of success can often be seen in how a person helps and contributes to others, rather than just for himself or herself.
- T. Caitlyn
Actually we humans are valuable beings but we don\'t know our values.
>> Actually, we humans are valuable beings, but we often don\'t know our own value.
To become a man of value means that you should find dignity of human beings and try to contribute to others\' and community\'s value rather than pursuing your own success.
>> To become a person of value means that you should find the dignity of human beings and try to contribute to others\' and the community\'s value rather than pursuing your own success.
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