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I am sorry for missing my class.
I was sleeping putting my cellphone another room.
1.The murder case gives a applling impact.
2.A new director regulates old company's rule.
3.The committee reconciles two baseball team that was combatted in the ground yesterday.
Plz..forgive me^^ Bye~
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Hi there! Thank you for sending a good composition. Be careful with your articles and your prepositions. Check out the corrections I made for some of your sentences. Have a nice day! ^^,
Teacher Aurora
I am sorry for missing my class.
>>CORRECTI was sleeping putting my cellphone another room. >>I was sleeping and I put my cell phone in another room.1.The murder case gives a appalling impact.
>>CORRECT2.A new director regulates old company\'s rule.
>>The new director regulates the old company\'s rule.3.The committee reconciles two baseball team that was combatted in the ground yesterday.>> The committee reconciles the baseball teams that fought in the ground yesterday.Plz..forgive me^^ Bye~
>>Please forgive me. Bye.
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