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2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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I am sorry for missing my class. I was sleeping putting my cellphone another room. 1.The murder case gives a applling impact. 2.A new director regulates old company's rule. 3.The committee reconciles two baseball team that was combatted in the ground yesterday. Plz..forgive me^^ Bye~

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Hi there! Thank you for sending a good composition. Be careful with your articles and your prepositions. Check out the corrections I made for some of your sentences. Have a nice day! ^^, Teacher Aurora I am sorry for missing my class. >>CORRECTI was sleeping putting my cellphone another room. >>I was sleeping and I put my cell phone in another room.1.The murder case gives a appalling impact. >>CORRECT2.A new director regulates old company\'s rule. >>The new director regulates the old company\'s rule.3.The committee reconciles two baseball team that was combatted in the ground yesterday.>> The committee reconciles the baseball teams that fought in the ground yesterday.Plz..forgive me^^ Bye~ >>Please forgive me. Bye.

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