Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.I smiled when there is something fun.>>I smiled when I saw something fun.
2.I ate sushi and drank green tea for yesterday\'s dinner.>>CORRECTOR>>I ate sushi and drank green tea for my dinner yesterday.
3.I was palying with my parents before dinner.>>I was playing with my parents before dinner. 4.I waited you all day long.>>I waited for you all day long.
5.She saw something was moving in the forest.>>CORRECTOR>>She saw something was moving the woods. 6.Did you brush your teeth before go to bed?>>Did you brush your teeth before you go to bed? 7.We went to beach, last summer.>>We went to the beach last summer. 8.My freind\'s younger sister cried because she hurt her knee riding bike without any safety items. >>My friend\'s younger sister cried because she hurt her knee from riding a bike without any safety gears. 9.I heard strange noise coming from neighborhood last week, probably they are decorating there house.>>I heard strange noise coming from my neighborhood last week, probably they were decorating there house. 10.I slept until the lunch time.>>I slept until lunch time.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
2.I ate sushi and drank green tea for yesterday\'s dinner.>>CORRECTOR>>I ate sushi and drank green tea for my dinner yesterday.
3.I was palying with my parents before dinner.>>I was playing with my parents before dinner. 4.I waited you all day long.>>I waited for you all day long.
5.She saw something was moving in the forest.>>CORRECTOR>>She saw something was moving the woods. 6.Did you brush your teeth before go to bed?>>Did you brush your teeth before you go to bed? 7.We went to beach, last summer.>>We went to the beach last summer. 8.My freind\'s younger sister cried because she hurt her knee riding bike without any safety items. >>My friend\'s younger sister cried because she hurt her knee from riding a bike without any safety gears. 9.I heard strange noise coming from neighborhood last week, probably they are decorating there house.>>I heard strange noise coming from my neighborhood last week, probably they were decorating there house. 10.I slept until the lunch time.>>I slept until lunch time.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
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