Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.Time is flowing very fast.>>CORRECTOR>>Time is running very fast.
2.It is almost quarter to nine, if you don\'t want to late to school you need to hurry.>>It is almost quarter to nine, if you don\'t want to be late to school you need to hurry.
3.Teacher is always check my homework.>>Teacher always check my homework. 4.If we late to something we need to say sorry to them.>>If we are late, we need to say sorry to them.
5.We need to sleep early and also we need to wake up early.>>CORRECTOR>>We need to sleep and wake up early. 6.The firework will start soon!>>CORRECTOR>>The firework is about to start. 7.My Power english class is start 3o\'clock.>>My Power English class starts at 3 o\'clock.
8.I\'m fifteen years old 4years later. >>CORRECTOR>>I\'m turning fifteen in 4 years.
9.The monster has fifty chubby finger.>>The monster has fifty chubby fingers. 10.If alarm clock is alive, it will yelling every morning near by bed>>If the alarm clock is alive, it will yell every morning nearby the bed.
Very good, Claire!Keep it up.- T. Melody ^^
3.Teacher is always check my homework.>>Teacher always check my homework. 4.If we late to something we need to say sorry to them.>>If we are late, we need to say sorry to them.
5.We need to sleep early and also we need to wake up early.>>CORRECTOR>>We need to sleep and wake up early. 6.The firework will start soon!>>CORRECTOR>>The firework is about to start. 7.My Power english class is start 3o\'clock.>>My Power English class starts at 3 o\'clock.
8.I\'m fifteen years old 4years later. >>CORRECTOR>>I\'m turning fifteen in 4 years.
9.The monster has fifty chubby finger.>>The monster has fifty chubby fingers. 10.If alarm clock is alive, it will yelling every morning near by bed>>If the alarm clock is alive, it will yell every morning nearby the bed.
Very good, Claire!Keep it up.- T. Melody ^^
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