Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.Fall is best season to watch colorful falling leaves.>>Fall is the best season to watch colorful falling leaves.
2.My father fix my toy and he also change the battery for me.>>My father fixed my toy and he also changed the battery for me. 3.I fly in my dream like I am super hero.>>I was flying in my dream like I am a super hero. 4.I like to feed my fish and I also like to watch them eating there foods.>>I like to feed my fish and I also like to watch them eating there food. 5.I don\'t want to fight my neighborhood because of noise.>>I don\'t want to fight with my neighbor because of the noise. 6.I can see the finish line finally.>>CORRECTOR>>I can finally see the finish line. 7.I fold the color paper and I make a bird.>>I will fold the color paper and make a bird.
8.The ship is floating above the water.>>CORRECTOR>>Ship floats on the water.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
2.My father fix my toy and he also change the battery for me.>>My father fixed my toy and he also changed the battery for me. 3.I fly in my dream like I am super hero.>>I was flying in my dream like I am a super hero. 4.I like to feed my fish and I also like to watch them eating there foods.>>I like to feed my fish and I also like to watch them eating there food. 5.I don\'t want to fight my neighborhood because of noise.>>I don\'t want to fight with my neighbor because of the noise. 6.I can see the finish line finally.>>CORRECTOR>>I can finally see the finish line. 7.I fold the color paper and I make a bird.>>I will fold the color paper and make a bird.
8.The ship is floating above the water.>>CORRECTOR>>Ship floats on the water.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
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