Tuesday homework
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Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Wow! you made your homework so fast! As always, it was very entertaining to read! It makes me want to meet her in real life too. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If I could meet a fictional character, I want to meet \'Mary Poppins\'.
>>CORRECT!
Because I want to drink the special liquid medicine that Mary Poppins give.
>>It\'s because I want to drink the special liquid medicine that Mary Poppins gives.
In the story, the flavor of the liquid medicine that Mary Poppins give is the flavor that all of the us\'s favorite.
>>In the story, the flavor of the liquid medicine that Mary Poppins give is everyone\'s favorite flavor.
I also want to go in the sketch with Mary Poppins and play in the sketch. That must be fun.
>>CORRECT!
Because if I draw the unicorn, rainbow, sweet treats I can feel it, see it, I can do everything.
>>CORRECT!
If we stay with her, we can clean up everything with one snap of finger.
>>If we stay with her, we can clean up everything in a snap of finger.
She is little bit drawn but she is the best nanny.
>>CORRECT!
We can call her magician. That\'s truth. That\'s the question. Somewhere on the Earth, are there Mary Poppins?
>>We can call her a magician. That\'s the truth. That\'s the question.
Somewhere on the Earth, are there Mary Poppins?
>>Somewhere on Earth, is there a Mary Poppins?
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