Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
Thank you for always making your homework! I love Japan as well. I want to travel there someday as well as South Korea. Let\'s hope that Covid-19 would end soon so we can travel. see you tomorrow in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If I could move to another country to live there, I want to live in Japan.
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Because there is hot spring, Universal Studio in Japan and quiet public place.
>>Because there are hot springs and the Universal Studio in Japan and quiet public places.
I love hot spring so when I visit Japan, I always visit hot spring.
>>CORRECT!
Especially winter. It\'s so nice to stay in hot water watching snow mountain view.
>>Especially in winter, it\'s so nice to stay in the hot water while watching the snow and the mountain view.
For USJ it is famous amusement [이름] in Japan. It\'s like branch of US\'s USH amusement [이름].
>>USJ is a famous amusement in Japan. It\'s like a branch of US\'s Universal Studios.
There is all kind of Disney character rides.
>>There are all kinds of Disney character rides.
Also there is character like Minions, Kitty, Sesame Street.
>>There are characters like Minions, Hello Kitty, and Sesame street characters.
There are so many stores selling so many cute character souvenir.
>>CORRECT!
Most importantly in Japan, Japanes are very quiet.
>>Most importantly, the Japanese are very quiet people.
So, everywhere we go in Japan, it\'s so quiet.
>>CORRECT!
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