Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Your wishes are so nice and selfless! ^^ If more people think like you do then we would have a peaceful world. I wish all of your wishes would come true someday! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If three wishes are given to me, I will wish for everyone I know\'s to good health.
>>If three wishes were given to me, I will wish for everyone I know to have good health.
the Second wish is for happiness.
>>CORRECT!
I hope everyone is happy all the time.
>>CORRECT!
Last wish is become super star in the world, like Ariana Grande.
>>My Last wish is to become a world-famous super star, like Ariana Grande.
I choose first wish for everyone\'s health because when I was baby, my lungs are not good, so I stayed hospital for many days.
>>I chose the first wish for everyone\'s health because when I was baby, my lungs were not good, so I stayed hospital for many days.
And that was terrible experience. I don\'t want to make people feel that.
>>CORRECT!
Second wish is happines for everyone and
everytime.
>>My second wish is for everyone to be happy every time.
I want to make people feel happy all the time, so they won\'t fight much also bad people\'s number will get smaller.
>>I want to make people feel happy all the time, so they won\'t fight much and also to make the number of bad people grow smaller.
Last wish is to become a super star.
>>CORRECT!
That is only for me but I really want to be one.
>>CORRECT!
I think that\'s really hard for me.
>>CORRECT!
Because I\'m not good at singing or acting, and there are so many people who want to be a
super star like me.
>>CORRECT!
But that is just my hope and I think I can find other new things I like.
>>CORRECT!
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