Tuesday homework
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Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
This was a very funny composition! I really enjoyed reading this haha. Thanks for your time! <3
~~Teacher Kate
I prefer cat as a pet.
>>CORRECT!
Because I like dog and cat both of them.
>>I like both cats and dogs.
Dog poop everywhere but I heared cat only poop in the sandbox.
>>Dogs poop everywhere but I heard that cats only poop in the sandbox.
Also cats are calm and they are really cute when they are sleeping under the window having a nice tan from the sun shine come throw from the window.
>>Also cats are calm and they are really cute when they sleep under the window getting a nice tan from the sunshine coming through the window.
But for active person, they can be more have fun with dogs.
>>But for active people, they can have more fun with dogs.
Even aliens know dogs are friendly and playful.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: HAHAHA! )
You have a dog and cat! Am I right? I love both cuties!! ^3^
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: Your memory is so good haha. I hope you\'ll have a pet someday too! <3)
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