Tuesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
Thanks for making your homework always! ^^ See you tomorrow <3
~~Teacher Kate
I like listen to white noises it’s so calming for me.
>>I like listening to white noises because they\'re so calming for me.
Because I like listen to the nature it makes me refreshing.
>>Listening to nature sounds makes me feel refreshed.
Do you think so? I think reason that people like listen to the white noise is people are part of the nature.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: this is a beautiful sentence! ^^)
Lastly the noise that I dislike is the noise come from fixing something.
>>Lastly the noise that I dislike is the noise that comes from fixing something.
For example the sound of nails, drills, and build the new buildings.
>>For example, the sound of nails, drills when building the new buildings.
They are not helpful for anything.
>>CORRECT!
Without making loud, noisy, and annoying sounds.
>>They can do it without making loud, noisy, and annoying sounds.
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