Tuesday Homework

2020-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Claire\'s homework

강사 첨삭

Hello Claire!
Thanks for making another homework. I hope you enjoyed your day. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

No, it’s hard to get up early in the morning to me.
>>No, it’s hard to get up early in the morning for me.
I always feel tired to get up early.
>>I always feel tired when I get up early.
I think online classes have influenced my morning too.
>>CORRECT!
Because before I have online classes I need to get up early to go to school. 
>>Because before I had online classes, I needed to get up early to go to school. 
But online classes start, and there is no need to wake up early for school.
>>But when online classes started, there was no need to wake up early for school anymore.
I can listen to online classes at any time because I stay home. 
>>CORRECT!
So there is no need to change clothes or do my hair.
>>CORRECT!
In zoom class, some of my classmates listen to the teacher in the bed.
>>CORRECT!
There is one more reason that I wake up late.
>>CORRECT!
I often sleep late these days so I can’t wake up early.
>>CORRECT!
That’s bad for my health.
>>CORRECT!
I will try to wake up early in the morning so I can eat breakfast at the regular time.
>>I will try to wake up early in the morning so I can eat breakfast at a regular time.

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