Tuesday Homework

2021-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What do you like about South Korea? What don\'t you like about it? A:First, I like South Korea\'s seasons are very clear. Second,I like South Korea has many delicious foods. I don\'t like South Korea has many spicy foods and Koreans like it. Second, I don\'t like here\'s things are very expensive.

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First, I like South Korea\'s seasons are very clear.
>>First, I like South Korea\'s very clear seasons.

Second,I like South Korea has many delicious foods.
>>Second, I like that South Korea has so many delicious food.

I don\'t like South Korea has many spicy foods and Koreans like it.
>>I don\'t like that South Korea has a lot of spicy food and Koreans like it.

Second, I don\'t like here\'s things are very expensive.
>>Second, I don\'t like that the things here are very expensive.

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