Tuesday homework
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Q:What\'s the most fun thing you did in the amusement park?
A:The most fun thing in the amusement park was the Roller Coaster.
First, I was exciting when I ride the Roller Coaster.
Second, it was very long Roller Coaster so I can ride it more then other Roller Coaster.
Third, I was some kind of scary but I ride it with my father so it was not that scary.
Last, when I came back to home I want to ride it again.
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The most fun thing in the amusement park was the Roller Coaster.
>>CORRECT
First, I was exciting when I ride the Roller Coaster.
>>First, it was exciting when I ride the roller coaster.
OR>>First, I was excited in riding the roller coaster.
Second, it was very long Roller Coaster so I can ride it more then other Roller Coaster.
>>Second, it was a very long roller coaster so I can ride it longer than other roller coasters.
Third, I was some kind of scary but I ride it with my father so it was not that scary.
>>Third, I was somewhat scared but I rode it with my father so it was not that scary.
Last, when I came back to home I want to ride it again.
>>Last, when I came back home, I wanted to ride it again.
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