Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What do you get from watching cartoons?
A:I get fun and imagination from cartoons.
First, cartoon is not a real situation or its subject is not a real situation
so there are many imaginations from author or movie director.
Second, most of cartoons are made because they want to fun someone
or made the people to interest in the cartoon so I can get imagination in cartoons.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! You did great with your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>I have fun and creative imaginations from cartoons.
First, cartoon is not a real situation or its subject is not a real situation
so there are many imaginations from author or movie director.
>>First, cartoons are not real things or its subject is not real so it comes from author and movie director\'s imaginations.
Second, most of cartoons are made because they want to fun someone
or made the people to interest in the cartoon so I can get imagination in cartoons.
>>Second, most cartoons are made because they want to make someone happy or make people be interested in cartoons so they can imagine using cartoons.
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