Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:How do you feel when it\'s snowy?
A:I feel good when it\'s snowy, but I don\'t feel when it\'s snowy a lot.
First, if it\'s snowy I feel good because it\'s white and, outside is also white to.
Second, if it\'s snowy a lot, I can\'t see snow and outside so I don\'t feel good when it\'s snowy a lot.
Last, but when the snow is dirty I don\'t feel good when it\'s snowy.
강사 첨삭
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>>I feel good when it\'s snowy but I don\'t feel well when it\'s snowing a lot.
First, if it\'s snowy I feel good because it\'s white and, outside is also white to.
>>First, if it\'s snowy, I feel good because it\'s white even outside.
Second, if it\'s snowy a lot, I can\'t see snow and outside so I don\'t feel good when it\'s snowy a lot.
>>Second, if it\'s snowing a lot, I can\'t see the snow outside so I don\'t feel good.
Last, but when the snow is dirty I don\'t feel good when it\'s snowy.
>>Last, I don\'t feel good when the snow is dirty.
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