Tuesday homework
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Q:What should you do when parents are angry at you over something?
A:I have to apology about it and never do it again.
First, if my parents are angry about something, it means I shouldn\'t do it so I\'ll apology about it.
Second, if my parents are angry about something, it will be something bad so I would never do it again.
Third, if my parents are about something I do then I have to regret about it too.
Last, if I don\'t do these three things then my parents will be angrier then before.
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I have to apology about it and never do it again.
>>I have to apologize for it and never do it again.
OR>>I have to offer an apology and never do it again.
First, if my parents are angry about something, it means I shouldn\'t do it so I\'ll apology about it.
>>First, if my parents are angry about something, it means I shouldn\'t do it so I\'ll apologize for it.
Second, if my parents are angry about something, it will be something bad so I would never do it again.
>>CORRECT
Third, if my parents are about something I do then I have to regret about it too.
>>Third, if my parents are angry about something I did then I have to regret about it.
Last, if I don\'t do these three things then my parents will be angrier then before.
>>Last, if I don\'t do these three things then my parents will be angrier than before.
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