Tuesday homework
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Q:What\'s your favorite weather?
A:My favorite weather is cloudy weather or windy weather.
First, I don\'t like hot places or weather and I don\'t like very cold places or weather so I like temperature just like cloudy or windy weather.
Second, if it\'s cloudy, there\'s no sunshine in anywhere so it is not that hot and, if it\'s windy, there is sunshine, but it\'s not that hot so I like that two weathers.
Last, if the weather is cloudy or windy it means I can play or go outside and, outside is not that hot so I like that two weather very much.
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My favorite weather is cloudy weather or windy weather.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My favorite weather is cloudy or windy.
OR>>I like cloudy or windy days.
First, I don\'t like hot places or weather and I don\'t like very cold places or weather so I like temperature just like cloudy or windy weather.
>>First, I don\'t like hot places and I don\'t like very cold places so I like the temperature of cloudy or windy.
>>Second, if it\'s cloudy, there\'s no sunshine anywhere so it\'s not that hot and if it\'s windy, there is sunshine but it\'s not that hot so I like these two weathers.
>>Last, if the weather is cloudy or windy, it means I can play or go outside because it\'s not that hot.
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