Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What is your favorite planet in the solar system?
A:My favorite planet in the solar system is Neptune.
First, I like it is the last planet in solar system.
Second, I like blue color too and, Neptune is blue planet so I like it.
Last, there are not hot and, there is no land so I like it too.
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~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
First, I like it is the last planet in solar system.
>>First, I like that it is the last planet in the solar system.
Second, I like blue color too and, Neptune is blue planet so I like it.
>>Second, I like blue color too and Neptune is a blue planet so I like it.
Last, there are not hot and, there is no land so I like it too.
>>Last, it\'s not hot and there is no land in Neptune.
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