Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What is the first thing you would do if you see a great white shark?
A:I\'ll relax and call call to rescue team and don\'t move.
First, a great white shark can catch my move with water so I have to stop moving.
Second, I can\'t stay there with great white shark so I\'ll call the rescue team.
Last, if great white shark go a way, then I won\'t call rescue team and go to the land with my power.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great work!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I\'ll relax, I will not move, and call the rescue team.
First, a great white shark can catch my move with water so I have to stop moving.
>>CORRECT
OR>>First, a great white shark can smell me in the water so I have to stop moving.
Second, I can\'t stay there with great white shark so I\'ll call the rescue team.
>>Second, I can\'t stay there with the great white shark so I\'ll call the rescue team.
Last, if great white shark go a way, then I won\'t call rescue team and go to the land with my power.
>>Last, if the great white shark goes away then I won\'t call the rescue team and just go to the land with my power.
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