Tuesday homework
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Q:What do you think is the problem of penguins?
A:The problem of penguins is south pole and north pole is melting.
First, penguins live in south pole and if it\'s melting then penguins can\'t live in the land.
Second, if pole is melting then the sea will blow up and the land will encroachment faster.
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>>The problems of penguins is that South and North Pole are melting.
First, penguins live in south pole and if it\'s melting then penguins can\'t live in the land.
First, penguins live in south pole and if it\'s melting then penguins can\'t live in the land.
>>
Second, if pole is melting then the sea will blow up and the land will encroachment faster.
>>Second, if the pole is melting then the sea will rise and the land will sink fast.
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