Tuesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:If you are going to make a scrapbook, what picture and other things will you put in it?
A:I\'ll put many pictures about animals and I\'ll put the texts too.
First, I like animals so I\'ll put the pictures about animals so I\'ll make a animal scrapbook.
Second, if there are just pictures then I can\'t remember it\'s name so I\'ll put the texts about animals.
Last, if I make a animal scrapbook then I can remember that I saw this animals so I\'ll put the animal pictures and texts in my scrapbook.
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Q: If you are going to make a scrapbook, what picture and other things will you put in it?
A: I\'ll put many pictures about animals and I\'ll put the texts too.
>>> I\'ll put many pictures and information about animals including some written text.
First, I like animals so I\'ll put the pictures about animals so I\'ll make a animal scrapbook.
>>> First, I like animals so I\'ll put the pictures about them so I\'ll make an animal scrapbook.
Second, if there are just pictures then I can\'t remember it\'s name so I\'ll put the texts about animals.
>>> Second, if I\'ll just have pictures then I can\'t remember their names so I\'ll put the texts about these animals.
Last, if I make a animal scrapbook then I can remember that I saw this animals so I\'ll put the animal pictures and texts in my scrapbook.
>>> Lastly, if I make an animal scrapbook then I\'ll be able to remember that I saw these animals so I\'ll put their pictures and texts about them in my scrapbook.
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