Tuesday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My favorite day of week is friday.

>> My favorite day of the week is Friday.
First, the next day of friday is the first day of weekend, so I can rest in the next day of friday.

>> First, the next day after Friday is the first day of the weekend, so I can rest on that day.
Second, I don\'t have any homeworks from my dad in friday, so I don\'t have to do anything in friday.

>> Second, I don\'t have any homework from my dad on Fridays, so I don\'t have to do anything.
Lastly, I have many freetime in friday, so I can do manythings that I want to, so my favorite day of the week is friday

>> Lastly, I have a lot of free time on Fridays, so I can do many things that I want to do.

so my favorite day of the week is friday

>> That\'s why my favorite day of the week is Friday