Tuesday homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Mango is the most delicious fruit in my opinion.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> Mangoes are the most delicious fruit in my opinion.
First, mango is very sweet if it\'s yellow, and it\'s very soft, so I like it.
>> Mangoes are very sweet if it\'s yellow and it\'s very soft, so I like it.
Second, usually most of mango that we it doesn\'t have any seeds, so we don\'t need to find seeds.
>> Usually, most mangoes that we eat doesn\'t have any seeds, so we don\'t need to remove the seeds.
Also, mango has very good smell, so it\'s my favorite fruit.
>> Also, mangoes have a very good smell so it\'s my favorite fruit.
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