Tuesday homework

2021-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:How do you treat a cold? A:I treat a cold by taking medicine and rest. First, I always take some medicines if I have a cold. Second, I don\'t have any energy if I have a cold, so I need to rest if I have a cold.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I treat a cold by taking medicine and rest.

>> I treat a cold by taking medicine and resting.
First, I always take some medicines if I have a cold.

>> I always take some medicine if I have a cold.
Second, I don\'t have any energy if I have a cold, so I need to rest if I have a cold.

>> I don\'t have any energy when I have a cold so I need to rest.

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