Tuesday homework

2021-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What would you bring to a pot-luck lunch? A:I would bring sandwich and kimbab to a pot-luck lunch. First, I can make sandwich easily, and it taste good, so I would bring it. Second, I can make kimbab quickly and easily, and it\'s kind of salty but it taste okay so I would bring it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I would bring sandwich and kimbab to a pot-luck lunch.

>> I would bring sandwiches and kimbab to a pot-luck lunch.
First, I can make sandwich easily, and it taste good, so I would bring it.

>> First is because I can make sandwiches easily and it tastes good so I would bring that.
Second, I can make kimbab quickly and easily, and it\'s kind of salty but it taste okay so I would bring it.

>> Second, I can make kimbab quickly and easily, also, it\'s kind of salty but it tastes okay so I would bring that.

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