Tuesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If I know the person that asks me , then I lend him some money, but if I don\'t know the person, then I ignore them.
>> If I know the person that\'s asking me , then I will lend him some money, but if I don\'t know the person, then I will ignore him.
And if he or she or they looks like blackguard, then I will run to somewhere that there is a security camera.
>> If he or she or they look like blackguards, then I will run somewhere where there is a security camera.
If I run to there, then their face will remain at the security camera, so the person will be caught by someone who saw that security camera.
>> If I run and go there, then their faces will be recorded in the security camera, so they will be caught by someone who will see that security camera.
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