Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I need a friend because of many reasons.

>> CORRECT!
The biggest reason is if I don\'t have a friend, then I\'ll feel more lonely at school and I can\'t feel that good at school if I don\'t have a friend.

>> The biggest reason is if I don\'t have a friend, then I\'ll feel more lonely at school and I won\'t feel that good at school if I don\'t have a friend.
And some more reasons are if I have a friend, I can talk with he or she, and if I\'m boring in weekends, then I can play with my friend.

>> Some more reasons are if I have a friend, I can talk with him or her and if I\'m bored on weekends, then I can play with my friend.