Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My favorite Korean custom is that Korean people always make Kimchi every winter.

>> CORRECT!
I like Kimchi very much, so I like that there are a lot of Kimchi here.

>> CORRECT!
Also, I made Kimchi last winter, and it was very fun, so I like that Korean people always make Kimchi every winter.

>> Also, I made Kimchi last winter and it was very fun, so I like that Korean people always make it every winter.